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4d ago
inI finally dropped my love for over-the-top prose
My buddy Mike wrote a whole chapter once where every single piece of rain was "crying tears from heaven" and "the sky's sorrow pouring down." I read it and told him straight up it sounded like a bad country song. He got defensive at first but then he read it out loud and even he started laughing halfway through. @sagejackson you nailed it with that "rain tapped against the window" change because simple words let your reader feel the scene instead of tripping over your vocabulary. Flowery stuff has its place but most of the time it is just fluff hiding the fact you don't trust your story to stand on its own. Save the fancy words for a moment that actually calls for them instead of plastering them all over everything.
4d ago
inTook me 2 full days to catch a sneaky auto-renewal clause in a vendor contract
Respectfully, I see it a little different. That 60 day notice is pretty standard in the landscaping supply world, especially if they're dealing with bulk delivery and seasonal demand. Your mileage may vary, but in my experience, those clauses are usually there because the supplier has to lock in their raw material orders way ahead of time. Getting them down to 30 days is a solid win for you, but I wouldn't call it sneaky so much as just how the industry works for bigger volume accounts. It's worth keeping an eye on, but I've seen way worse hidden fees buried in equipment lease contracts.
5d ago
inThat old electrician in Birmingham told me to stop using push-in wire connectors, and he was right
Two years of work. I'd be sick.
5d ago
inThe difference between a 6010 root pass and a 7018 fill rod is night and day since I switched 3 years ago.
Tried the hot and fast method, just burned through my good hoodie lol.
6d ago
inTried stacking 200 photos of Andromeda and got a worse result than with 50
Huh, that is weird but I've noticed the same kinda thing with other stuff. It's like when you try to make a perfect playlist and add too many songs, the good ones get lost in the mess. For photos, if the quality of each frame isn't steady, the software just averages in the bad ones and you end up with a blurry, noisy result instead of a clean one. Sometimes less really is more, especially when you're picky about what you keep.